Peer Review-Ricky

Ricky

     I really enjoyed reading all of your blog posts. Your writing has grown since the beginning and you write a very clear and logical essay. You have a keen sense of your own opinion that adds to the depth of your posts. You are able to give an original viewpoint and keep your readers interest. You also use the text citations to your papers advantage of getting your point across.

     For your final paper just make sure to proofread to make sure even if it is spelled correct that it is also the word you wanted to use. I know the blog site can sometimes post your writing in a format without indentations (it happened to me a couple times) but be sure your paragraphs are set apart so it is easier to read and the reader knows when you are starting a new idea.

I chose these as your “greatest hits”!

It's Just Finance 11/4/10: High five to you on this one. You were able to take a difficult subject and explain it well. Your conclusion was most interesting as you brought in the element of greed, so to speak as a social factor. The WHY of Finance would be an interesting read.

Are They Good or Bad For Us? 10/28/10: I enjoyed this piece on German Immigrants. You did your research and it shows. The comparison to non-immigrants really drives your point home. It was full of details and flowed nicely.

What Love and Relationships Are Made Of 10/5/10

Your introduction is eye catching and has my attention at the first sentence: If we hold the view that things such as love and relationships are greatly affected by chemistry and biology, then our opinions would probably change quite drastically. I liked how you played back and forth between the science of love and the emotion of love.